Traditional Headshots 3

3° part of the practice doodles XD.
PLEASE CRITHIC
Ok this one is something like an epic fail, and i didint had any ideas for draw so hush.

(Up): This one is lol, but this drawing is something like fail cuz now i realized that the hair is inverted so sorry.

(Down): Tried to make Utatane Piko but its another epic fail cuz i didnt remembered his design =_=